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Writings by Katie
Posted: Tue Aug 15, 2017 7:28 pm
by Katie10
I used to have some story's here but am replacing them with other things. Please give me your honest feedback. Thank you!
Re: Fan fiction by katie
Posted: Tue Aug 15, 2017 7:32 pm
by Katie10
Animals
Animals are cute
Nothing can separate me and them
I think there awesome
Mom thinks they stink
And nothing can stop that but
Little do they know a
Small little animal lives in our front porch
Re: Fan fiction by katie
Posted: Wed Aug 16, 2017 4:56 pm
by PennyBassett
Aw, these are so sweet! I'd love to read more!
Re: Fan fiction by katie
Posted: Fri Aug 18, 2017 10:02 am
by Katie10
I just got rid of the chapter because I am doing other things here
Re: Fan fiction by katie
Posted: Mon Aug 21, 2017 10:34 am
by Katie10
Same as the last answer.
Re: Fan fiction by katie
Posted: Thu Aug 24, 2017 8:46 pm
by GJFH
Keep it up, katie! These are sweet.
Re: Fan fiction by katie
Posted: Thu Aug 24, 2017 8:46 pm
by Katie10
Sadness
A deep pain
I feel like I'm locked up in chains
I'll run away on trains
Just to get away from this pain.
Re: Fan fiction by katie
Posted: Thu Aug 24, 2017 9:07 pm
by GJFH
It might help if keep the whole thing one size instead of shrinking some lines. I understand you want to let people know how serious Jules is being, but it's a little hard to follow like that.
