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I used to have some story's here but am replacing them with other things. Please give me your honest feedback. Thank you!
Banananananananana
I had to spell banana for our school spelling bee
I had to spell banana a simple word you see
I had to spell banana and then I started one two three
Banananananana..... Then they stop me hafe way through i didn't even finish yet
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Animals
Animals are cute
Nothing can separate me and them
I think there awesome
Mom thinks they stink
And nothing can stop that but
Little do they know a
Small little animal lives in our front porch
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Aw, these are so sweet! I'd love to read more!
"Let me get this straight. I bet all those non-friends of yours try to embarrass you about your love for that stuff, right? So, you almost feel like you have to hide your treasures away and can only take them out in secret on rainy days when your mom goes to the store to get more liver and nobody is around to berate your sensitive spirit. Is that what you’re saying?" -Jay Smouse
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I just got rid of the chapter because I am doing other things here
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Same as the last answer.
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Keep it up, katie! These are sweet.
I consider that our present sufferings are not worth comparing with the glory that will be revealed in us - Romans 8:18

It’s not enough to be against something. You have to be for something better. – Tony Stark
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Sadness
A deep pain
I feel like I'm locked up in chains
I'll run away on trains
Just to get away from this pain.
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It might help if keep the whole thing one size instead of shrinking some lines. I understand you want to let people know how serious Jules is being, but it's a little hard to follow like that. :)
I consider that our present sufferings are not worth comparing with the glory that will be revealed in us - Romans 8:18

It’s not enough to be against something. You have to be for something better. – Tony Stark
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