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- Sat Nov 12, 2016 12:55 pm
- Forum: The Gallery
- Topic: Adventures in Odyssey fanfiction
- Replies: 203
- Views: 78503
Re: Adventures in Odyssey fanfiction
Chapter 3 "How about this one?" said Connie. She stepped out of the dressing room in a red dress she wasn't too sure about. "That's beautiful," said Jason. "That's what you said about the last five." "I told you, as long as you're in them, you're all I see." &...
- Sat Nov 12, 2016 12:50 pm
- Forum: The Gallery
- Topic: Adventures in Odyssey fanfiction
- Replies: 203
- Views: 78503
Re: Adventures in Odyssey fanfiction
Thanks AuntKate, Kathy0, and GJFH! It's really encouraging to know people are reading this and like it enough to keep reading. This is wonderful Ameraka, the picture you painted with your words, especially with the last few paragraphs. I also like how you describe Jason, you did not try to change an...
- Tue Nov 01, 2016 8:55 pm
- Forum: The Gallery
- Topic: Adventures in Odyssey fanfiction
- Replies: 203
- Views: 78503
Re: Adventures in Odyssey fanfiction
Chapter 2 Jason hung up, his heart fluttering at the turn of events. He looked at Connie who had an apprehensive, expectant look on her face. Her green eyes stunned him with their beauty; for a moment he couldn't remember what his father had just said. "What happened?" said Connie. "N...
- Tue Nov 01, 2016 8:46 pm
- Forum: The Gallery
- Topic: Adventures in Odyssey fanfiction
- Replies: 203
- Views: 78503
Re: Adventures in Odyssey fanfiction
Thanks AuntKate, PennyBassett, and Kathy0!
AuntKate-- I did read it. I hope you post more! I like original fiction too, although I do devour anything that is AIO fanfic.
AuntKate-- I did read it. I hope you post more! I like original fiction too, although I do devour anything that is AIO fanfic.
- Tue Nov 01, 2016 8:45 pm
- Forum: The Gallery
- Topic: The Miscellaneous Works of Jo March
- Replies: 25
- Views: 11708
Re: The Miscellaneous Works of AuntKate
You're a good writer. I like that you write about history. That's sad that your siblings lost their friend at Columbine. I noticed a common error: in dialogue, there's a comma, not a period, before the end quotation marks, and the dialogue tag begins with a lower case letter. For instance: “Let’s go...
- Sun Oct 30, 2016 6:40 pm
- Forum: The Front Counter
- Topic: New Book Series
- Replies: 14
- Views: 6689
Re: New Book Series
Oh GJFH. That's what I want too. You know that. I also like Dr. Blackgaard as a villain. He's still one of the best villains, not just on AIO, but in all media. I'm interested in these new scenes. This is very exciting. I'll read it. I actually tried to write a novelization of Darkness Before Dawn a...
- Fri Oct 28, 2016 11:27 pm
- Forum: The Gallery
- Topic: The Many Works of GJFH
- Replies: 79
- Views: 35341
Re: The Many Works of GJFH
I like The Sea. I can almost hear the rhythm of the rain in it.
Cool drawing too. If your self-portrait is any indication, you're very pretty.
Cool drawing too. If your self-portrait is any indication, you're very pretty.
- Wed Oct 26, 2016 10:40 am
- Forum: The Gallery
- Topic: Adventures in Odyssey fanfiction
- Replies: 203
- Views: 78503
Re: Adventures in Odyssey fanfiction
Thank you AuntKate!! :D Here's the first chapter of Generation. I hope you like it! Chapter 1 Connie held Jason's hand as they walked into the wilderness. The sunlight caught his features, showing his strong profile, the scar on his left cheek. How had she taken him for granted? So soon after they w...
- Wed Oct 26, 2016 10:04 am
- Forum: Secret Society
- Topic: OAC Episode Discussion
- Replies: 258
- Views: 97621
Re: OAC Episode Discussion
Ok so animals may not be people but they can be close companions. Even with people, the majority of our communication is nonverbal. We can become very emotionally attached to animals. They are not able to give as sophisticated companionship as people, but they can be very in tune with people's emoti...
- Sun Oct 23, 2016 11:38 am
- Forum: The Gallery
- Topic: Adventures in Odyssey fanfiction
- Replies: 203
- Views: 78503
Re: Adventures in Odyssey fanfiction
Thank you GJFH! Thanks for being a faithful reader and reviewer. It's wonderful to know that what you put so much of yourself into and loved writing is also loved by someone else and affects them emotionally. Whenever I get a review it makes my day. I like to share what I enjoy, share Connie and Jas...
- Sat Oct 22, 2016 12:49 am
- Forum: The Gallery
- Topic: The Many Works of GJFH
- Replies: 79
- Views: 35341
Re: The Many Works of GJFH
You're good at writing close POV, with visceral reactions and sensory details and imagery. It seems realistic and authentic to how Connie would feel and act. It's an interesting time period to write about which I haven't thought much about but you recreated it vividly. There are some grammatical err...
- Sat Oct 15, 2016 11:08 am
- Forum: The Gallery
- Topic: Adventures in Odyssey fanfiction
- Replies: 203
- Views: 78503
Re: Adventures in Odyssey fanfiction
Chapter 12 In the dark, Jason reached for her. She lay there, cold, still, letting his hand roam over her hair, face, and neck. But she couldn't respond. She couldn't give him what he wanted. She felt numb; she couldn't feel toward him like she used to. After that night, something in her had broken....
- Sat Oct 15, 2016 12:14 am
- Forum: The Gallery
- Topic: Hipster's pencil
- Replies: 18
- Views: 6391
Re: Hipster's pencil
you're an awesome artist! I'd like to see more drawings! You're really good at eyes. And people.
- Fri Oct 14, 2016 6:59 pm
- Forum: The Gallery
- Topic: The Many Works of GJFH
- Replies: 79
- Views: 35341
Re: The Many Works of GJFH
COol! Yay, Jason! I do like his eyes.
I think there's a way to resize the picture but I'm not sure how to do it...
I think there's a way to resize the picture but I'm not sure how to do it...
- Thu Oct 13, 2016 2:34 pm
- Forum: Community Courtyard
- Topic: Nationalities
- Replies: 40
- Views: 10965
Re: Nationalities
I am English, German, and "a teensy bit of Irish" as my great grandmother said. I think some Native American also, way back though. This is an interesting topic. I'd like to do the ancestry.com thing. My uncle has (mom's brother). I think we have more Irish than we thought. On Dad's side I...
- Mon Oct 10, 2016 12:15 am
- Forum: The Gallery
- Topic: PennyBassett Fanfiction
- Replies: 376
- Views: 114567
Re: PennyBassett Fanfiction
I love this! Filling in the blanks of what happened when Eugene lost his memory, from Katrina's perspective. I'd like to read more! You are a wonderful writer, PennyB.
- Fri Oct 07, 2016 10:27 pm
- Forum: The Gallery
- Topic: Adventures in Odyssey fanfiction
- Replies: 203
- Views: 78503
Re: Adventures in Odyssey fanfiction
Chapter 11. I don't describe more than kissing in this chapter, implying anything else but just a heads up. It is in a spoiler too. But tell me if it's ok. "I was worried sick about you!" said Jason, his heart pounding with relief and anger. It poured through him and before he could stop i...
- Fri Oct 07, 2016 9:59 pm
- Forum: The Gallery
- Topic: Adventures in Odyssey fanfiction
- Replies: 203
- Views: 78503
Re: Adventures in Odyssey fanfiction
Thank you! You made my day. (though everyone should be a Jason/Connie fan )Didi wrote:Ameraka, I am not a Connie+Jason fan, but...this is wonderful!
- Wed Oct 05, 2016 5:41 pm
- Forum: Episode Study
- Topic: Why the Lost Episodes Should Never Have Been Lost
- Replies: 27
- Views: 10126
Re: Why the Lost Episodes Should Never Have Been Lost
Because a child is ending the life of his sister's beloved pet? I mean, on what level is deliberately drowning a cat—a pet that a good many of the listeners of this show own— not going to be scary to a kid? ;) Hm, I don't remember that ep. Is it on OAC? The idea of killing a cat--no matter whether ...
- Wed Oct 05, 2016 10:08 am
- Forum: The Front Counter
- Topic: Odyssey Epiphanies
- Replies: 7
- Views: 3625
Re: Odyssey Epiphanies
I admit it. I was exceptionally clueless as a small child, and lots of stuff went right over my head. So, as the years go by, and I re-listen to Odyssey episodes, I constantly catch myself thinking, "Wait— that's what that meant?" Here are my three favorite Odyssey-related epiphanies. \:D...